what should i call my story
how is this, can you please give me a name? “Where are
they?!?” l ran through the bead-curtain in the doorway of my bedroom. l
searched frantically through my jewelry box, “C’mon, where are
they?” l searched and searched till l saw something glow blue, “Ahhh,
there they are.” l held up the sparkling sapphire necklace, ring, and
bracelet. Passed down from my ancestors, Sapphira and Sabola, my
grandparents, and today l , Sabrina, was to get the sapphire crown. /> l had five other sisters, Diana, Emily, Rubeth, Amy and Aquadite. They had already been crowned, when they were my age. Rubeth the first, Diana the second, Emily the third, Aquadite the fourth, Amy the fifth and l was going to be Sabrina the sixth, the last of the Gemdelite kind. l was the youngest, the purest and the most powerful. Then l heard the trumpets sound and my sisters singing the crowning anthem. l quickly pulled on my gold robe and sandals and put on all of my jewelry and then l ran outside to join my sisters. By the time l got there they were just finishing the anthem, l started singing too. My father, King Oberon the first, stood up from his throne to crown me. He carried the beautiful sapphire crown in his hands, it twinkled blue as the sunlight shone upon this item of prosperity. He chanted the words of everlasting youth and power, formositas, auctoria. Then he placed the crown upon my head, “Formositas pestis, auctoria pestis, eloquor regine.” All of my sisters clapped, my real mother out of all six and of course my father and his close friends. Soon after the ceremony l went back to my room to put all of my sapphire jewelry items back. l placed my sapphire bracelet, necklace and ring back in my jewelry box safe and sound. Finally, l carefully opened the blue crown box and lifted the crown off my soft brown hair. l slowly and carefully moved it towards the box. It was in mid-place when Ash, my jeweler, knocked on the door rather loudly and opened it, “hey, Sabrina!” l dropped the crown. It smashed loudly, “Oh no! Sabrina what’ve you done?!?” Ash picked up the broken bits of sapphire, “Oberon won’t be happy when l tell him that you broke the sapphires. Did you know that these sapphires fell from the sky? What will we do?” Ash looked timid, he was shivering and gritting his teeth, “Ash, you’re the one that yelled at me. They would’ve broken anyway; they’re over a million years old. Tell my father.” Ash nodded and then tip-toed out the door. l was about to change into my robes when the ground shook. l knew this was because of the sapphires and l ran straight to The Gemdelite Hall where l knew my father was waiting with my mother and sisters, “Sappirah, what have you done?” my father called me by my Gem-name, “I’m sorry.” My father hit the hard, rock-like ground with his Gemstone staff, “Sorry does not make the stars fall from the sky.” My father grumbled shaking his head up at the sky, “What do you mean fall from the sky.” l said. Rubeth began to speak, “Sapphires are no ordinary gems Sappirah, They are fallen stars. The goddess of the Gems, Skye, planted diamonds, amethyst and all those other Gems deep, beneath rocks, while she hung sapphires in the sky that disappear during the day.” l nodded at Rubeth pleading forgiveness from my father, “Please, father, If you want l can retrieve a different type of sapphire.” My father stroked his silver beard, “Hmm, well l suppose there is one other type of sapphire that is just as powerful.” l nodded listening closely, “Sapphirite, one of the Jewel gods hidden in one of the legendary Gem-holes. But you must retrieve it with great care.” l stood before my father and bowed to him, “Thank you father, l will retrieve the Sapphirite at dawn.”
Fallen stars
fallen Sapphire
Sapphire dawn
Broken gems
The Sapphire Folly
Umm, that is all I've got for now, Hope I could help :)
Sapphirite at dawn
or The dawn of Sappirah (I like this one best)
Your story is very good, I don't even like these kind of fantasy fictions,
but yours just grabbed me. Well done!
Sapphirite dawn
Fallen for Fathers Jewells~~
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