what should i call my story


Mo , Monday, 9th of August 2010 09:15:21 PM

how is this, can you please give me a name?

“Where are 
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they?!?” l ran through the bead-curtain in the doorway of my bedroom. l 
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searched frantically through my jewelry box, “C’mon, where are 
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they?” l searched and searched till l saw something glow blue, “Ahhh, 
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there they are.” l held up the sparkling sapphire necklace, ring, and 
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bracelet. Passed down from my ancestors, Sapphira and Sabola, my 
grandparents, and today l , Sabrina, was to get the sapphire crown. />
l had five other sisters, Diana, Emily, Rubeth, Amy and Aquadite. 
They had already been crowned, when they were my age. Rubeth the first, 
Diana the second, Emily the third, Aquadite the fourth, Amy the fifth and 
l was going to be Sabrina the sixth, the last of the Gemdelite kind. l was 
the youngest, the purest and the most powerful.

Then l heard 
the trumpets sound and my sisters singing the crowning anthem. l quickly 
pulled on my gold robe and sandals and put on all of my jewelry and then l 
ran outside to join my sisters. By the time l got there they were just 
finishing the anthem, l started singing too. My father, King Oberon the 
first, stood up from his throne to crown me. He carried the beautiful 
sapphire crown in his hands, it twinkled blue as the sunlight shone upon 
this item of prosperity. He chanted the words of everlasting youth and 
power, formositas, auctoria. Then he placed the crown upon my head, 
“Formositas pestis, auctoria pestis, eloquor regine.” All of my 
sisters clapped, my real mother out of all six and of course my father and 
his close friends.

Soon after the ceremony l went back to my 
room to put all of my sapphire jewelry items back. l placed my sapphire 
bracelet, necklace and ring back in my jewelry box safe and sound. 
Finally, l carefully opened the blue crown box and lifted the crown off my 
soft brown hair. l slowly and carefully moved it towards the box. It was in 
mid-place when Ash, my jeweler, knocked on the door rather loudly and 
opened it, “hey, Sabrina!” l dropped the crown. It smashed loudly, 
“Oh no! Sabrina what’ve you done?!?” Ash picked up the broken bits 
of sapphire, “Oberon won’t be happy when l tell him that you broke the 
sapphires. Did you know that these sapphires fell from the sky? What will 
we do?” Ash looked timid, he was shivering and gritting his teeth, 
“Ash, you’re the one that yelled at me. They would’ve broken anyway; 
they’re over a million years old. Tell my father.” Ash nodded and then 
tip-toed out the door.

l was about to change into my robes 
when the ground shook. l knew this was because of the sapphires and l ran 
straight to The Gemdelite Hall where l knew my father was waiting with my 
mother and sisters, “Sappirah, what have you done?” my father called 
me by my Gem-name, “I’m sorry.” My father hit the hard, rock-like 
ground with his Gemstone staff, “Sorry does not make the stars fall from 
the sky.” My father grumbled shaking his head up at the sky, “What do 
you mean fall from the sky.” l said. Rubeth began to speak, “Sapphires 
are no ordinary gems Sappirah, They are fallen stars.

The 
goddess of the Gems, Skye, planted diamonds, amethyst and all those other 
Gems deep, beneath rocks, while she hung sapphires in the sky that 
disappear during the day.” l nodded at Rubeth pleading forgiveness from 
my father, “Please, father, If you want l can retrieve a different type 
of sapphire.” My father stroked his silver beard, “Hmm, well l suppose 
there is one other type of sapphire that is just as powerful.” l nodded 
listening closely, “Sapphirite, one of the Jewel gods hidden in one of 
the legendary Gem-holes. But you must retrieve it with great care.” l 
stood before my father and bowed to him, “Thank you father, l will 
retrieve the Sapphirite at dawn.”
 
 
 
 
 

Chicka/o , Tuesday, 10th of August 2010 10:46:33 AM

Fallen stars  
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fallen Sapphire  
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Sapphire dawn  
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Broken gems  
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Umm, that is all I've got for now, Hope I could help :)  
 
 
 
 
 

hunni bunni , Wednesday, 11th of August 2010 12:53:18 PM

Sapphirite at dawn  
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or The dawn of Sappirah (I like this one best)  
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Your story is very good, I don't even like these kind of fantasy fictions,  
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but yours just grabbed me. Well done!  
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Smalls , Thursday, 12th of August 2010 01:14:10 PM

Sapphirite dawn  
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PEANUT , Friday, 13th of August 2010 05:46:11 PM

Fallen for Fathers Jewells~~  
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